Time's Passageway, Carnivalesque

Mysteriously intimidating.
Intensely disturbing.
Dim, smoky, noisy. Of what force
Hellish, so pushed on down?

Where a changeful melt of figures, faces
And worse, feeling phases
From out its walls, grasp at attentions
Does ooze. Life's renown!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Whatley Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 6:13 AM
Very interesting freeform style, James! Is this from the perspective of looking at a tunnel of memories and somebody's life?
Watkin Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 4:03 PM
Thankyou so much Micheal. Refers to just going through life on Earth. With Time as a passageway. Sorry for late reply
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