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Time's Passageway, Carnivalesque

Mysteriously intimidating. Intensely disturbing. Dim, smoky, noisy. Of what force Hellish, so pushed on down? Where a changeful melt of figures, faces And worse, feeling phases From out its walls, grasp at attentions Does ooze. Life's renown!

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Date: 5/23/2022 6:13:00 AM
Very interesting freeform style, James! Is this from the perspective of looking at a tunnel of memories and somebody's life?
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James Watkin
Date: 10/20/2022 4:03:00 PM
Thankyou so much Micheal. Refers to just going through life on Earth. With Time as a passageway. Sorry for late reply

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