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timeless turmoil hiku

gates of steel d i s s o l v e salt c l o a k s the sand-soaked castles ~ a timeless t u r m o i l

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Date: 5/12/2025 4:11:00 AM
And this Hiku is timeless, too.Stay creative dear Ink! Congratulations on your top win. A FAVE!!! ^___^JCB
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Date: 5/11/2025 12:03:00 PM
It seems that you're stuck even those people see you as free- "salty", not quite a fairytale castle, is it? Wishing you well today, Ink.
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Date: 5/11/2025 3:47:00 AM
Timeless turmoil … so cute
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