Ink Empress Poet Haiku

timeless turmoil hiku

gates of steel d  i
                       s   s 
                            o
                             l
                         v      e
salt c l 
          o a 
            k s  the sand-soaked castles ~
a timeless t u
                      r
                   m
                      o
                      i  l 

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Duke Beaufort May 15, 2025 at 12:38 PM IE, you've captured the essence of Ozymandias in a Haiku. Nature is indeed relentless and those who understand this can accept that we must live in the present and try to enjoy this wonderful gift of life that we are lucky enough to possess. It's only ours for a brief instant. I'm sending you smiles of enjoyment and hope that you are loving every waking minute!!!

JC Brul May 12, 2025 at 4:11 AM And this Hiku is timeless, too.Stay creative dear Ink! Congratulations on your top win. A FAVE!!! ^___^JCB

Paige Hind May 11, 2025 at 12:03 PM It seems that you're stuck even those people see you as free- "salty", not quite a fairytale castle, is it? Wishing you well today, Ink.

The Aura Rhymes May 11, 2025 at 3:47 AM Timeless turmoil … so cute