Timeless Oxford

I stood by the bridge 
Gazing down at the greens 
Of the trees on the banks 
At the union of streams. 

Through mossed balustrade 
Reflected I'd spy 
The spires of Magdalen 
In watery sky. 

Leaves on the water 
Red, yellow and gold 
By unseen currents, 
The near bank hold. 

Bright against grey 
In light autumn shower 
A shimmering halo 
Above the stone tower. 

Wide wavelets circling 
The still picture flows 
A fast spreading mask 
Where the hidden fish rose. 

By the far bank 
The ripple passes 
Halting the gaze 
Of hanging grasses. 

Thinned willow and elm 
Where pigeons coo, 
As in the past 
They forever will do. 

Now Michaelmas comes, 
New faces appear, 
But Oxford unchanged 
Will greet the new year.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/20/2014 9:10:00 PM
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Neil Mcleod
Date: 4/21/2014 12:33:00 PM
Dear Jerry, Thank you for your encouragement for the two poems I have submitted. I am going to continue to work on this site. Best wishes Neil
Date: 1/7/2014 9:26:00 PM
Good poem. Nice imagery. I have been to England once, for about a month, actually. It makes me want to go back.
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Neil Mcleod
Date: 4/21/2014 12:30:00 PM
I so appreciate the thoughtful comments made here by our peers. This poem is going into a new collection called "The Thorn With Me" which will be coming out this year. My books of poetry are on Amazon, and poetry.com Best wishes Neil
Date: 1/2/2014 1:26:00 PM
Hi Neil, You can study each link on the side left hand side, that's what I first did, you might want to study the poets, and the poems, and what makes this a great supporting community. I'm sending you soup mail.... I hope you know how to navigate the mail area... xox... LINDA
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Date: 1/2/2014 5:19:00 PM
Thank you so much for taking time to help me. Neil
Date: 1/1/2014 4:07:00 PM
Neil, hope you are enjoying the first day of the year.. , I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/2/2014 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Linda, I am finding my way around just now and wanting to know the best way to use and participate in this community. D you have any suggestions? drneilmcleod@yahoo.com
Date: 12/31/2013 6:24:00 AM
I like the Oxford take, Niel, Hope you are enjoying the New Year holidays, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, This is deep!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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Neil Mcleod
Date: 9/28/2014 8:58:00 PM
Dear Skat, Thank you for you kind remarks about "Timeless Oxford" please accept my apologies for taking such a long time to get back to you. I have not familiarized myself with the technical ins and outs of Poetry Soup. I will enjoy your frindship, and I am about to start regularly contributing to this site and would value you opinion. Best wishes, Dr Neil Stewart McLeod
Date: 12/31/2013 3:21:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Neil ! - Thank you for your first poem here, I like it. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2014 9:00:00 PM
Hello Anne, I do appreciate your extending the hand of friendship to me, thank you! I shall take your advice. Dr Neil Stewart McLeod
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