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Timeless

Timeless



suspended in time 
hourglass broken and forlorn -
past, present, future

06-01-2014

lifemetaphorsymbolismtimesenryu

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Lenny Gazbowski

April 19, 2016 at 9:18 PM

The Oneness of It All Pandita, the Eternal Now. Lovely senyru. You are a gifted wordsmith Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos

April 20, 2016 at 8:45 AM

I so much appreciate the compliments, support, and inspiration! Thank you, Lenny! Pandita

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

January 30, 2015 at 11:52 AM

It could have been an ideal condition past, present, future all merged into one point. Ugh. Love Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos

January 30, 2015 at 1:28 PM

Thank you so much, Rajat for visiting and for your kind comment! Kindest regards! Pandita

Kika Ayala

July 9, 2014 at 1:03 AM

This is really beautiful! I like it a lot! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos

July 9, 2014 at 1:08 AM

Kika, thank you so much. Your compliments mean a lot to me.

Poet Destroyer A

June 9, 2014 at 10:00 AM

your welcome

Poet Destroyer A

June 9, 2014 at 8:16 AM

i like this one very much...PD

Pandita Sietesantos

June 9, 2014 at 9:58 AM

Thank you so much for your kind compliments, my friend!

Fisayo Aderounmu

June 7, 2014 at 9:07 AM

Good work, so creative. I like it.

Pandita Sietesantos

June 7, 2014 at 10:18 AM

Thank you so very much, my friend - I appreciate your kind comment! Kindest regards.

John Michaels

June 5, 2014 at 7:31 AM

Very nice. Was this for the "Hourglass" competition? I missed my chance to enter that one... and just as well, as I'm sure this would have beaten me!!! :)

Pandita Sietesantos

June 5, 2014 at 8:34 AM

Thanks for the big compliment, John. I wrote this then later found out about the contest - but I did not compete.

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 4, 2014 at 11:33 AM

I love this creative Haiku!

Pandita Sietesantos

June 4, 2014 at 11:46 AM

Thank you so much for the feedback and support! Kindest regards!

Connie Marcum Wong

June 3, 2014 at 1:08 AM

Accurate outlook regarding time standing still, written in a unique and entertaining way with your personal flair!

Pandita Sietesantos

June 3, 2014 at 6:56 AM

Thank you so much, Connie for visiting and for your kind comment! Kindest regards!

John Beharry

June 2, 2014 at 10:53 PM

Powerful write! Captures the essence of the Taoist "Eternal Now".

Pandita Sietesantos

June 3, 2014 at 7:00 AM

What a wonderful compliment! Let's me know I am learning. Thank you so much John! Best regards.

Sara Kendrick

June 2, 2014 at 3:49 PM

Unique work that you have penned in this one..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Pandita Sietesantos

June 2, 2014 at 4:15 PM

Thank you Sara for your visit and for your valuable comment! Kind regards!

Toquyen Harrell

June 2, 2014 at 12:02 PM

Lol. Yeah, frozen in time :) Cute, Pandita!

Pandita Sietesantos

June 2, 2014 at 1:38 PM

Many thanks for visiting, Toguyen! Kind regards!

Jerry Bolton

June 2, 2014 at 11:58 AM

I love the 5-7-5 when I write or read senryu's or haiku's, and loved this one's indepth association because of time stalled, leaving the reader to muse about what has happened to stop time from going in any direction.

Pandita Sietesantos

June 2, 2014 at 2:06 PM

Thanks, my friend. Your insights are always appreciated and help to further inspire and encourage me. Thank you so much!