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Timeless

Timeless suspended in time hourglass broken and forlorn - past, present, future 06-01-2014

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/19/2016 9:18:00 PM

The Oneness of It All Pandita, the Eternal Now. Lovely senyru. You are a gifted wordsmith Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 4/20/2016 8:45:00 AM

I so much appreciate the compliments, support, and inspiration! Thank you, Lenny! Pandita

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/30/2015 11:52:00 AM

It could have been an ideal condition past, present, future all merged into one point. Ugh. Love Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/30/2015 1:28:00 PM

Thank you so much, Rajat for visiting and for your kind comment! Kindest regards! Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 7/9/2014 1:03:00 AM

This is really beautiful! I like it a lot! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/9/2014 1:08:00 AM

Kika, thank you so much. Your compliments mean a lot to me.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 10:00:00 AM

your welcome

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 8:16:00 AM

i like this one very much...PD

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/9/2014 9:58:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind compliments, my friend!

Fisayo Aderounmu

Date: 6/7/2014 9:07:00 AM

Good work, so creative. I like it.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/7/2014 10:18:00 AM

Thank you so very much, my friend - I appreciate your kind comment! Kindest regards.

John Michaels

Date: 6/5/2014 7:31:00 AM

Very nice. Was this for the "Hourglass" competition? I missed my chance to enter that one... and just as well, as I'm sure this would have beaten me!!! :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/5/2014 8:34:00 AM

Thanks for the big compliment, John. I wrote this then later found out about the contest - but I did not compete.

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/4/2014 11:33:00 AM

I love this creative Haiku!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/4/2014 11:46:00 AM

Thank you so much for the feedback and support! Kindest regards!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/3/2014 1:08:00 AM

Accurate outlook regarding time standing still, written in a unique and entertaining way with your personal flair!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/3/2014 6:56:00 AM

Thank you so much, Connie for visiting and for your kind comment! Kindest regards!

John Beharry

Date: 6/2/2014 10:53:00 PM

Powerful write! Captures the essence of the Taoist "Eternal Now".

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/3/2014 7:00:00 AM

What a wonderful compliment! Let's me know I am learning. Thank you so much John! Best regards.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/2/2014 3:49:00 PM

Unique work that you have penned in this one..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/2/2014 4:15:00 PM

Thank you Sara for your visit and for your valuable comment! Kind regards!

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 6/2/2014 12:02:00 PM

Lol. Yeah, frozen in time :) Cute, Pandita!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/2/2014 1:38:00 PM

Many thanks for visiting, Toguyen! Kind regards!

Jerry Bolton

Date: 6/2/2014 11:58:00 AM

I love the 5-7-5 when I write or read senryu's or haiku's, and loved this one's indepth association because of time stalled, leaving the reader to muse about what has happened to stop time from going in any direction.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/2/2014 2:06:00 PM

Thanks, my friend. Your insights are always appreciated and help to further inspire and encourage me. Thank you so much!