Time Wise

TIME WISE
The early bird got the worm , the not-so-early,  precious hours of......sleep!

Aug21, 2016
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Monoku madness
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Scars Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 4:11 PM
sooo very cute! congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
Singh Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 8:38 PM
Thanks, Laura!
Chansarkar Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 9:49 AM
haha,I can never be an early bird too!Congrats Sushma!
Singh Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 11:31 AM
Thanks, Sara. With me it is just the reverse. A compulsive early bird , I have always been secretly envious of those enjoying their sleep late into the morning!!This monoku is probably a reflection of that deep seated grudge!!!
Roper Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 9:03 PM
haha... I love my sleep, Sushama, Oh perfect monoku, :) Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Singh Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 11:32 PM
Thank you,Eve! Laugh and the world laughs with you. Best, Sushma
Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 8:21 PM
hahaha. LOVE it. I am NOT an early worm. but I don't get good sleep either.
Singh Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Thank you so much,Andrea.I feel pleased to have evoked some laughter.
Y. Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Hi Sushma, Lol! Good one-liner. Congratulations on your winning write: -)Alexis
Singh Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 8:58 PM
Thank a lot for your kind words.
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