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Time Will Wail

Time will wail As love trips away And the sky won't stay Time will wail On the big ocean where seasons sail And in words written in the grail Time will wail By the green oak so pale By the fish without any scale Time will wail And the world won't say And experiences will decay Time will wail In futures veil And in the luxurious vain Time will wail For those who fail And by the innocence of jail Life will wail On jeopardy's rail On Doom's trail Life will wail And it won't wait When the clock is tamed on a fox tail Life will wail.

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/8/2016 4:19:00 PM

A definite seven white sage. Your words flow like a river of time, ever moving, never stopping as they flow down the page. Time is ever moving. I Love the concept of the write and the style used. The words do sing my friend. I have really enjoyed the read. A seven my Friend....Vladislav.

White Sage
Date: 1/8/2016 4:30:00 PM

thanks Vladislav...glad you came by

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2015 6:05:00 PM

Shehu, awesome flow and rhyme pattern. what is it... A bb aaaa cc a bb aa ? aaaaaaa ? aa ..Love it... I can't even pull off an AA BB CC ... I'm rating your poem with a 7, time happens to be one of my favorite poetry subjects. Love LINDA

White Sage
Date: 1/8/2016 4:37:00 PM

thanks Linda, am sure you can do more better in that, you are great and awesome