Time Warp To 1973

Time Warp to 1973

Beam me back: nineteen, seventy-three.
I sleeping alone, too dark to see.
Something suddenly awakened me.
There, at the foot of my bed, stood three.

Side by side glowing figures stayed still.
Who were those spirits that caused my chill? 
Together, silent, against my will
Sightings like this did great fear instill.

Garments of light donned different designs.
One kingly figure wore clothes refined.
Another one armored...ancient times.
The peasant was third; simple clothes shined.  

Perplexed by the vision; fearing more.
Too frozen to speak, thoughts rushed galore.
Bolstered up courage; words stayed their track.
“Go! Go away; and never come back!”

This was not the first vision for me.
As a child, I saw more than just three. 
Never, like this, did fear capture me.
Unexplained nigh in seventy-three—



© Name withheld for contest
    January 6, 2010

Written for Danielle White’s Poetry Soup member contest: Time Warp
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 4/5/2010 6:35:00 PM
Wow, what did they want? Chilling story- Congrats Dane Ann
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Date: 4/5/2010 10:39:00 AM
I believe you DID see spirits that night, Dane Ann. Congrats on your success in Danielle's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/7/2010 3:59:00 AM
Interesting dream or aparitions. Compelling write that drew me in and held my attention. Should do well in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 1/6/2010 9:16:00 AM
I can relate to all those scary dreams. Seems I get them once in a while and I shake my head and wonder why you dream what you dream. God Bless Phyl
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