Time To Go,

As I look away to no longer see into your eyes my heart now looks else where
not to replace you not to move on just to be with a love I fell for long ago 
unlike you I fill complete with this love as if we never said good bye 
and when my love came back I knew I needed to be there,
lost for months with out my love I knew some thing was missing
my days were long my nights seemed lost as if I was without
now I know that will no longer be I am now complete
the sun will shine the bright moon will be raising,
please don,t cry it's betters way it's meant to be
this love... so true...unlike no other out there
our love?...you knew this day would come 
see I was lost and need to be set free,
sorry I'll miss you please stand tall
dry your tears, raise your head  
please forgive but you know
I LOVE FOOTBALL!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/4/2010 11:19:00 AM
NICE!!!!!!! i enjoyed that one..great use of ur words...im gonna keep reading through ur poems cause i like what im reading...
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Date: 9/1/2010 9:35:00 PM
Terrific punch line at the end Michael.. an awesome write... so incredible with suspense and then the classic end line.. well I LUV FOOTBALL too.. GIANTS..as I live right outside New York City ... and so far pre season has not shown ans 'stars' especially quarterbacks..luv.. whats your fav team? poetry and football kinda go together ... both creative and gifted..luv...
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:23:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry Michael. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol
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