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Abdul Malik Mandani

Time To Fall

A nip in the air,
Time for foliage splendor,
Winter in the wings!

Copyright © Abdul Malik Mandani | Year Posted 2014

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August 12, 2014 at 9:22 AM

Congrats on this unique twist on Autumn which is my fav time of the year...Winter will be taking flight sooner than we know!! Congrats, Abdul!

Abdul Malik Mandani

August 12, 2014 at 10:29 AM

Yes, you are right. We jumped from spring to winter this time. Where did the summer go? Thanks for your comments.

August 10, 2014 at 2:34 PM

Beautiful win. Congratulations.

Abdul Malik Mandani

August 11, 2014 at 10:11 AM

Thanks Faye (Dunaway?). I am honored! Lol. Appreciate your comment.

Suzanne Delaney

August 9, 2014 at 3:35 PM

Congratulations, I love the stage you have set.

Abdul Malik Mandani

August 9, 2014 at 6:18 PM

Whenever there's a nip in the air, I get the chills! Even after 30 years in this country, I haven't gotten used to the old man winter. Thanks for your comments.

August 9, 2014 at 9:45 AM

Beautiful First place winner! Great one!

Abdul Malik Mandani

August 9, 2014 at 6:16 PM

Thanks Casarah.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 11:29 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Abdul Malik Mandani

August 9, 2014 at 6:15 PM

I knew I had something there when I wrote it. But, well, IT WAS an "Aha" moment for me.

Archana Kapoor Nagpal

August 8, 2014 at 6:53 AM

Congratulations!

Abdul Malik Mandani

August 9, 2014 at 6:13 PM

Thanks a bunch.

August 8, 2014 at 5:51 AM

congrats on a wonderful haiku Hugs Jan xxx

Abdul Malik Mandani

August 9, 2014 at 6:13 PM

Thanks Jan.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 8, 2014 at 5:02 AM

Awesome haiku Abdul ! congrats on first place win!

Abdul Malik Mandani

August 9, 2014 at 6:13 PM

Glad you liked it. Thanks.

August 8, 2014 at 1:00 AM

nice Haiku. Love the imagery.

Abdul Malik Mandani

August 9, 2014 at 6:12 PM

Appreciate your comments. Thanks

August 8, 2014 at 12:42 AM

I like the line "Winter in the wings", Abdul. Congrats on great win.

Abdul Malik Mandani

August 9, 2014 at 6:11 PM

It's my line: "Always in the wings!" Never able to fly! Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2014 at 11:40 PM

HEY, so good to see this one top of the list. BIG congrats, Abdul.

Abdul Malik Mandani

August 9, 2014 at 6:10 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Verlena S. Walker

August 7, 2014 at 11:25 PM

Nice Abdul... Congratulations on your 1st place win... Verlena

Abdul Malik Mandani

August 9, 2014 at 6:09 PM

Thanks, Verlena.

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