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Time To Die

When hope is lost and love is gone. There's just no reason to go on. A poet's lament ain't worth a dime. Nobody wants to hear that rhyme. The world is for the lucky ones. Not for those the shadow shuns. I pray each night my soul to take. And hope that I may not awake. I buy my ticket in hopes I win. But I'm still paying for my sin. The end can't come for me too soon. I'm tired of singing this same ole tune. I don't want to live no more. The sanctimony is such a bore. So I will not apologize. For there's more to life than being wise. P.S. The double negative in the last verse kind of wrote itself. HMM.

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Date: 6/17/2016 11:22:00 PM
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Date: 6/15/2016 3:36:00 PM
double negatives are ok when we all can understand what you mean, Robert! I really like this one. Very lyrical. you don't need the apostrophes in the second verse.
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Robert Johnson
Date: 6/15/2016 4:57:00 PM
Thank you Teacher. :) Please forgive my juvenileness. I was going to just say thanks teach. But, got carried away. Peace. :) And thanks for the nice comments. Means a lot.
Date: 5/25/2016 2:19:00 PM
hmmm ... what inspired this? Nice rhymes.
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