Time Ticker

Walking along the way
Enjoying the company every day
Careful to never take for granted
That time is slightly slanted
...to tick

Click, click, was that a hicc UP

Wait, no...what!?!
It can NOT
   be true
I never noticed
That time had voted
  To bring you new

opportunity

      without

             me

No one asked me
No one cared to see
If I was done being
If I was done with needing
      
    your presence
        the intoxicating joy
              of your perfect essence

just.....gone...

It's over......you grew
Time tricked and ticked,
     then
          clicked you
Out of my nurturing ground
Without so much as a sound
Of warning

How can I rejoice in your growth
When you have built your own boat
With the tools I gave you from my shed
I knew you would leave one day
But never could I have imagined in the way
You left the home where I had provided a nice bed

    to be at peace

It's that stupid time ticker
That takes the clicker
And runs you past the place
Where intimacy shares
And LOVE fully cares
In the moment of empty space


Written by Trudy Schrader on 06-27-2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/28/2018 5:55:00 AM
Trudy.. I enjoyed reading your work this morning. Always nice to check out creative lines with a cup of coffee!
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Date: 6/28/2018 6:29:00 AM
Thank you! Poetry is my processing tool. I'm a verbal processor, so I can't really work through the negative emotions until I spill it out to see what I'm dealing with...I'm a cow...three times usually does the trick ;)
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