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Time, the Last Hope

Time is the last hope I took every antidote Far from an edge of solution Disappointed by some illusion I cried for help But just my scream was echoed in the empty room and faded How cruel! How vain! But I can’t blame anyone Burning anger, but to no one God gave me the ability to forget New day will come, but we’ve not there yet No one will have pain No one will boast in vain But I know For a while I will suffer Even if I can do nothing One day the storm will pass away Wind will stop blowing anyway How comforting! How exciting!

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Date: 2/25/2017 1:01:00 PM
Wow. This is... beautiful. You capture the essence of hope in ordinary language for anyone to read. Great job. Keep it coming!
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J. Amorose
Date: 2/25/2017 7:16:00 PM
Anytime. I've never been a famous poet here, but I like encouraging others who have potential to unleash their power onto the paper.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 2/25/2017 1:26:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 2/25/2017 1:01:00 PM
And here comes a 7...
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Date: 2/24/2017 3:34:00 PM
Really beautiful and touching. I'm not kidding or trying to flatter you. This poem of yours is really good.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 2/24/2017 3:40:00 PM
Thank you, Osamu.

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