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Time Stood Still

I stood their silent upon that hill ,Such a weird feeling as time stood still. Me and 
my dog all alone, Waiting for the hearse to leave your home. I knew what time you 
were going by. Then i saw the hearse i stood and cried, I was feeling sad deep 
inside. My falling tears i could not hide ,You were the one that ruined my youth, I 
built up courage i told you the truth. I stopped talking to you years ago, I did the 
right thing yes i no. The hardest thing i ever done, I beat my demons i had won. I 
only cried for the dad i never had, You can hurt me no more I am glad
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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March 31, 2014 at 6:45 AM
Brilliantly penned poem. Congrats on your poem being featured this week, trisha
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