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Time Stood Still

Time stood still in a place so far away
Can you survive another day
Drowning in your bitter sorrow
Will I see you tomorrow
I count each step as you leave
Can't take in the lies you want me to beleive
Hopeless days filled with broken nights
Your veins passing through her venomous bites
My whole life I wanted you there
All the bad you've done I still care
Maybe the anger will never go away
but at least now I know you are here to stay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 5:09 PM
enjopyed reading today.
Kendrick Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 3:56 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned...Not sure about the interpertation for it is kinda confusing..Keep the creative pen flowng..Sara
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