Line Gauthier Poet Rhyme

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Time So Elusive

run run run
days coming undone
managing thick and thin
while doing the backspin
hoped for a miracle
for time in a capsule
a mere hideaway
but no way, jose!



AP: Honorable Mention 2023, Honorable Mention 2023

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Kim Rodrigues May 14, 2023 at 11:20 AM Great emotion! Love the no way, jose…lol Line Gauthier May 19, 2023 at 9:17 PM Thank you so much, Kim ~

Gershon Wolf May 9, 2023 at 9:26 PM I love that 'hiding place' for time -- 'in a capsule.' No way, Jose, eh?! Profound, fun and funny all at once, and in so few words. Thank you, Dear Artist at Work, ~ Gershon Line Gauthier May 14, 2023 at 6:44 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon ~