Time So Elusive

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run run run days coming undone managing thick and thin while doing the backspin hoped for a miracle for time in a capsule a mere hideaway but no way, jose! AP: Honorable Mention 2023, Honorable Mention 2023 Posted on May 9, 2023

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/14/2023 11:20:00 AM

Great emotion! Love the no way, jose…lol

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2023 9:17:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim ~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/9/2023 9:26:00 PM

I love that 'hiding place' for time -- 'in a capsule.' No way, Jose, eh?! Profound, fun and funny all at once, and in so few words. Thank you, Dear Artist at Work, ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/14/2023 6:44:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon ~