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Time - Single Rhyming Couplet

Time promised our love one more day
Death was jealous and stole you away!


written August 26, 2012
10:13 p.m.

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Nick Bagnall

September 18, 2012 at 6:01 AM

Congrats on the win, nice thinking, pulls at the heart.

Cynthia Alvez

September 18, 2012 at 9:06 AM

Nick, I appreciate your comment...thanks so much! Cynthia

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2012 at 3:14 PM

very clever one. Congrats on your win.

Cynthia Alvez

September 6, 2012 at 3:47 PM

Thank you Andrea...it was the voice of truth! Cynthia

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

September 6, 2012 at 1:05 PM

Congrats on a wonderful win with your poignant couplet, Cynthia...heartbreaking words you have shared...hugs, Rhonda

Cynthia Alvez

September 6, 2012 at 3:49 PM

Thank you Rhonda...few lines of a real truth. Cynthia

Poet Destroyer A

September 5, 2012 at 7:24 PM

Cynthia, congratulations, with your awesome couplets in Susan's "Time - single rhyming couplet contest " I really am enjoying many of her winners... good night~PD

Cynthia Alvez

September 5, 2012 at 7:48 PM

PD... Thank you so much! I appreciate your comment. Cynthia