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Time Single Regret

Written: November 12, 2025, for contest sponsored by Tom Woody ***************** If granted the power to time-slip back— not a scale of edits, just one clean crack in the epoch’s obstreperous spine— What would I convert? What moment, what line? Would I sieve the tumult of history’s breath, undo a war, a plague, a death? Or would I vilify my own dwarfish past, pluck one thread from the tapestry vast? I considered Napoleon’s umbrella, or whispering sense to a gin-soaked fella who discern “Titanic” meant unsinkable fate— But the glitch was mine, not the ship’s mistake. I’d fly to the day I didn’t say “stay,” when love was a lissome, vivacious ballet, and I, a moribund, wan little rabbit, Let fear swindle my healthier habit. She stood in a nimbus of vernal light, a pioneer of pleasure, a rotund delight. I was a hayseed with embryonic grace, a virtuoso of silence, an evocative face. I’d evolve that. Just that. No replay. No sesquipedalian excuses or rhapsodic decay. Just one word spoken, one velvet touch— not humdrum, not blithe, but just enough. Let the empyrean writhe with ululation, let the rubble of regret find its station. I’d be her possessor of time, a zoetic glitch in fate’s design. And if the Nereids complain against me, If the metaphor of kismet tries to unfree My choice, I’ll redeem my soul with song— a mellifluous farewell to what went wrong.
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Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 9:59 PM
Cool poem Sotto. Congratulations on your big win
Roper Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 8:33 AM
Great verse in maybe looking into your past to maybe do things a little differently. Congratulations on your win in Tom's contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 8:33 AM
Third verse is my favorite! Well done! Congrats!
Kerr Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 7:03 AM
Sotto, Of all the most eclectic empowering poetic odysseys you have ever embarked on and embraced this elegant rhyme must be in the upper echelon of my personal favourites. Heartiest congratulations on your success, Howard
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:10 PM
outstanding poem, a fave for me.....you addressed the prompt so beautifully. These words spoke to me: I’d fly to the day I didn’t say “stay,” when love was a lissome, vivacious ballet, and I, a moribund, wan little rabbit, Let fear swindle my healthier habit. In another lifetime it seems I was that moribund, wan little rabbit...thanks for this masterpiece. Texas hugs, Sara
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:04 PM
Oh my Goodness, this is so beautiful Sotto, astoundingly beautiful. Another fave. Again, I am sporadically here, but when I am back on site, I feel like a butterfly visiting my favorite flowers, as you are one of them, and this beautiful blossom is a fave. A fave of faves!
Sheehan Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 4:32 PM
Nice rhymes with good rhythm and flow. The soul can be redeemed with song. Powerful pen.
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