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Time Seems To Stand Still

Time seems to stand still,
when laying in our bed.
Is our love real,
or all in my head?

Time seems to stand still,
while looking into your eyes.
In the fields of daffodil,
us together is paradise!

Time seems to stand still,
when we're together alone.
Your kisses are such a thrill,
especially on the collarbone!

Time seems to stand still,
and our love rings true.
These intense emotions I feel,
can only come from you!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 6:26 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and I think this poem is one of your best Jimmy. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
Wesley Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 11:56 AM
Tender and sweet Jim, I'm glad I found you.
Haick Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 5:43 PM
From your heart comes this real gem, beautiful and heartwarming, JAM. Hang tight Papi. : ) Love, Audrey
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April 21, 2011 at 8:48 AM
A breathtakingly beautiful love poem, Jimmy. There have been moments in time I wish had lasted forever too. This is the kind of poem you write so well -- romance and love. Proud to have a little brother with so much talent. Love, Carolyn
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