Time Passes

The wind whipped
The child spoke
The slipper fell
They called her simple folk

The tire screeched
The moment passed
Long forgotten
Hidden in the past

The painting glowed
The figure moved
The light of life
Impressions of food
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wood Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 5:32 PM
Hi Lynn See what happens when you remove the 'The' word at the starr of each line.
Yaseen Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 1:13 PM
This is simply brilliant
Krutsinger Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 2:42 PM
This is fast-paced, and interesting. Welcome to Poetry Soup!
D. Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 6:15 PM
Thanks.
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