*time Never Ending*

*Time Never Ending*

Life's about chances
Moments to feel
Fear to grasp

She began to party
But,
Heart ach came to others
Sadness came to mothers
That moment that was fun,
Turns out there was a gun

Life's now no fun
Sorrow, aching bodies lie

Her love lying in agony
Thinking there was no life set for her
Begging as the gun points her way
Trebling, and will offer anything
Handing money, giving options
But,

All that was done was from her self
Passed out as the cops come
Hearing talking so, she opens her eyes
No darkness no party
Just a shot side, she wonders

Is it the end?
No screams just peace.

After all was done, she soon lost her mind
Ages 50 and still believe he'll come
Telling others her love will come
Clueless that November 13 was the day that he was done
Having faith, he would come
Yet,
No one can convince to her
She has so much faith
Lost in time she starts again.
Dressed up for the party
The party that was forgotten
Others wonder
Will she ever know?
Copyright ©2008 Marissa Stoops
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 10/14/2009 8:30:00 AM
Good write, Marissa. Thanks for sharing this poem. Though it is sad, there are lessons to be learned. Peace, audrey
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