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dust scent through cold trampled field whilst butterflies hung by their wings to dry blood curled the black birds drizzle depth of dark gray sheet-apostate stealth hunt 12/29/2019 Poetry Contest: ku duet Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 1/8/2020 7:10:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Eve. Well penned.
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Date: 1/5/2020 9:28:00 PM
CONGRATS on your first-place win, Eve. Janice
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Date: 1/5/2020 8:39:00 AM
Great imagery Eve--congrats on your first place win.
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Date: 1/5/2020 8:30:00 AM
So dark and powerful, Eve; quite different from your usual style. ~ Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/5/2020 7:38:00 AM
A deep write Eve, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 1/4/2020 9:14:00 PM
This deep. I had to read it a couple times to gather meaning. Sometimes winter or lost love feels this. Powerful imagery. Congrats!
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Date: 1/4/2020 5:46:00 PM
wow was this inspired by the picture or did you find a picture for it afterward? Regardless, very creative!!! Congrats, Eve.
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Date: 1/4/2020 4:03:00 PM
I love the depths of this poem. You cast a powerful imagery. Congrats on your 1st place. JC
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Date: 1/4/2020 1:25:00 PM
- A wonderful ku duet, Eve :) - Congratulations on a 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2020 11:17:00 AM
powerful imagery Eve... congratulations on your top placement :) hugs
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Date: 1/4/2020 7:39:00 AM
Great imagery..Wonderful victory..
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Date: 1/4/2020 7:05:00 AM
That first line gets me! Wow! Congrats, Eve!
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Date: 1/4/2020 6:49:00 AM
damn this is dark and so deep.. a few lines full of imagery.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 1/1/2020 5:27:00 PM
Your imagery has me purposefully studying the photograph which is expressed magnificently in this poem.
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