Eve Roper Poet Monoku

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Time Lost All Realism

dust scent through cold trampled field whilst butterflies hung by their wings to dry
blood curled the black birds drizzle depth of dark gray sheet-apostate stealth hunt



12/29/2019
Poetry Contest: ku duet 
Sponsored by: Silent One

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Line Gauthier January 8, 2020 at 7:10 PM Congrats on your top win, Eve. Well penned.

Janice Canerdy January 5, 2020 at 9:28 PM CONGRATS on your first-place win, Eve. Janice

Vijay Pandit January 5, 2020 at 8:39 AM Great imagery Eve--congrats on your first place win.

Paul Callus January 5, 2020 at 8:30 AM So dark and powerful, Eve; quite different from your usual style. ~ Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul

Joseph May January 5, 2020 at 7:38 AM A deep write Eve, Congrats on your win..

Juliet Ligon January 4, 2020 at 9:14 PM This deep. I had to read it a couple times to gather meaning. Sometimes winter or lost love feels this. Powerful imagery. Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2020 at 5:46 PM wow was this inspired by the picture or did you find a picture for it afterward? Regardless, very creative!!! Congrats, Eve.

Jc Hawkens January 4, 2020 at 4:03 PM I love the depths of this poem. You cast a powerful imagery. Congrats on your 1st place. JC

Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2020 at 1:25 PM - A wonderful ku duet, Eve :) - Congratulations on a 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams January 4, 2020 at 11:17 AM powerful imagery Eve... congratulations on your top placement :) hugs

Jenish Somadas January 4, 2020 at 7:39 AM Great imagery..Wonderful victory..

Kim Rodrigues January 4, 2020 at 7:05 AM That first line gets me! Wow! Congrats, Eve!

Silent One January 4, 2020 at 6:49 AM damn this is dark and so deep.. a few lines full of imagery.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Caren Krutsinger January 1, 2020 at 5:27 PM Your imagery has me purposefully studying the photograph which is expressed magnificently in this poem.