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Drops of rain a pulse of pain Down from head to face stiffening my veins i see lights in the streets shinning though the evening mist afternoon turned night a sorrow face of dark Pain as i say goodbye to day to it am saying ' i'll always be a friend" and hope every morning to be right here God willing, i'll go nowhere !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 3:57 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 24, 2016 at 4:07 PM
Ummar hamis, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 3, 2016 at 10:13 PM
Ummar, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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January 2, 2013 at 12:39 PM
must be hard to face the night when you know the tragedy it bares, well described, Ummar. and welcome to poetry soup!-Lucas-
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