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Time Is Waiting

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For: Time Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Ink Empress

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Where is the wildflower, where does it wander in the time of nearly Spring, does it dream of the sun? Time is such a tiny word for that which keeps us interred in waiting for the perennial paradise of the soul.

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Ink Empress

Date: 3/8/2024 10:38:00 AM

Dear chetta, something about the way you weave words is truly evocative and soul stirring! I felt the depth of your lines so well delivered here with exquisite imagery too. Your verse, although short is moving and meaningful: I especially loved “ where does it wander in the time of nearly Spring, does it dream of the sun?” I love always a poem with questions, and the ending too is beautiful! A fav it is. Congratulations on your win: thank you for sharing

Chetta Achara
Date: 3/8/2024 1:32:00 PM

Thank you

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/4/2024 4:44:00 PM

ooo...this is a soul grabbing poem and a sure contender for the contest. I like your poetic style!

Chetta Achara
Date: 3/4/2024 7:44:00 PM

Thank your kind comment. I appreciate the encouragement because I sometimes doubt myself.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/4/2024 12:20:00 PM

Hello Chetta Achara, time is slow sometimes. Then again time can pass quickly. Blessing my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/5/2024 10:29:00 AM

Hello Chetta Achara, so nice to meet you. yes you are right, about getting older time does passes by quickly. You are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/.

Chetta Achara
Date: 3/4/2024 12:58:00 PM

And the older we get the faster it passes. Thank you for taking a small bit of time and commenting on my poem. I appreciate it.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/4/2024 9:51:00 AM

Dear Chetta, Your poem echoes the quiet longing for the arrival of Spring and the blossoming of life. Your words evoke a sense of anticipation, capturing the essence of nature's anticipation for the sun's warm embrace. The juxtaposition of time as a "tiny word" against its profound impact on our existence is thought-provoking: an intricate role in our lives and the perennial search for inner fulfillment. After reading I want to reflect on the cyclical nature of time and the eternal yearning for spiritual nourishment. - Blessings, Daniel

Chetta Achara
Date: 3/4/2024 10:10:00 AM

Our life is framed by time, beginning and then ending ~ surely there is more? Thank you for your thoughtful critique.