Time Is Violated

I call upon my Reaper
Only he can save me now.
Watch me fall deeper,
Watch me fall down.

Feeling broken,
Barely breathing
Words re-main unspoken
My body seizing.

Artificial light blinds me,
Criples me.
The sound of the Banshee.
The forgotton bourgeoisie.

My impending sorrow,
My fortitude annihilated.
Is there tomorrow?
Time is violated.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Breidenthal Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 1:24 PM
:P Preeeety amazing poem! :O I liked these 4 line the best (epic indeed): My impending sorrow, My fortitude annihilated. Is there tomorrow? Time is violated. and the beginning o' course! 0-o DWB
Brackley Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 2:15 PM
Thank you very much, I have to agree , that's my fave part too :) Stacey
Campi Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 5:46 AM
Quite a poem you have written here. There is lots of power in your words. The poem is so sad. You did well. Jancarl
Brackley Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 12:44 PM
Thank you very much.
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