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Time Is Violated

I call upon my Reaper Only he can save me now. Watch me fall deeper, Watch me fall down. Feeling broken, Barely breathing Words re-main unspoken My body seizing. Artificial light blinds me, Criples me. The sound of the Banshee. The forgotton bourgeoisie. My impending sorrow, My fortitude annihilated. Is there tomorrow? Time is violated.

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/24/2012 1:24:00 PM

:P Preeeety amazing poem! :O I liked these 4 line the best (epic indeed): My impending sorrow, My fortitude annihilated. Is there tomorrow? Time is violated. and the beginning o' course! 0-o DWB

Stacey Brackley
Date: 5/24/2012 2:15:00 PM

Thank you very much, I have to agree , that's my fave part too :) Stacey

Jancarl Campi

Date: 3/29/2012 5:46:00 AM

Quite a poem you have written here. There is lots of power in your words. The poem is so sad. You did well. Jancarl

Stacey Brackley
Date: 4/3/2012 12:44:00 PM

Thank you very much.