Time Is Unkind

flower of beauty welts   dies in the wake of time so   as the body

12/23/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Callus Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 5:30 AM
Time does not usually show much mercy!! Congratulations on you podium finish, Eve! Hugs & Happy new year! // paul
Johnson Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 8:18 PM
Congratulations! Well done.
Watt Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 12:59 AM
Beautiful, Eve. I love "dies in the wake of time". Congrats on your well-deserved placement!
Ligon Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 10:10 PM
Great comparison. Congrats!
Canerdy Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 5:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Eve! Janice
Messina Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 4:55 PM
Ooh... good one, Eve. Congrats on your win. Hugs Charlie
Adams Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 3:07 PM
oh so very true this one is... life is as beautiful and as fragile as a flower... love this one... congratulations on your win :) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 2:26 PM
Good one, Eve. Congrats on your podium finish.
Neumann Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 1:04 PM
Unless we use plastic ...which sucks.
Green Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 9:16 AM
Sometimes it sure feels that way. Wonderfully stated Eve.
Poetry Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 7:52 AM
So wek, so strong...beautiful words... salute alkas
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