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Time heals all wombs

time heals all wombs at your funeral the priest babbles on while you lie there motionless I watch your tiny headstone weep in the rain 7/15/11

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Date: 7/21/2011 10:31:00 AM
This sure is very creative,Susan :) starting from the title to the concept of shape poetry-- a very good write, sad yet truly stayed with me...
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Date: 7/18/2011 6:17:00 PM
This is wonderful Susan I love shape poetry, I have done a few but this is marvelous! I can hear the rain smacking the tarp covering the attendants of the funeral, I can smell the wet rain so this has imagery for the eyes and the senses!
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Date: 7/16/2011 3:33:00 PM
wow, what an interesting title to put on this one. One day this person will have another child it tells me. VERY nice.
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