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Time For Champagne

Lost in haze of her dusky eyes My senses all overpowered Nudging me for more bright hours Of quiet, sparkling connections; Part of wine's bubbly enticement. Contest of nette onclaud : Abecedarian

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Danny Derden

Date: 6/20/2025 10:41:00 AM

You've captured a dreamy, intoxicating moment of connection with elegance and subtle sensuality. The imagery of “dusky eyes” and “wine’s bubbly enticement” evokes both emotional depth and playful allure. There’s a soft rhythm to the lines that mirrors the haze of affection and longing described. In just a few words, it conveys the allure of a shared moment that lingers like a pleasant buzz. A concise, evocative piece that blends romance and atmosphere with finesse.