a repost from 2010 when rhyme was my incline
Blank verse dances to five-feet time but its endline words,never rhyme, (unlike this poem ,I've begun!) Its syllables,uneasy scan, and makes it somewhat, a lost cause if you cannot locate the pause, structure helps its refrain along, constraint,with freedon,its theme song.
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