Sara Kendrick Poet Shape

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Time Flows Through the Hour Glass

Time keeps marching on second by second flows

Minute by minute the sand just goes

Daytime, lunch, peace, or wartime

Springtime, sublime time

Time trickles

Time 

Like nickles

Slips through overtime

Soon it reaches wintertime

Where the time went only God now knows

Time keeps marching on second by second flows  


nickel, American coin worth 5 cents

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Patrick Nigros December 11, 2018 at 5:40 AM Ha-Ha-Ha. Beautiful Piece. Thanks for your visit. Reading the through this piece, I though of the day i posted my First poem on this soup. i remember it like it was yesterday it was Five years Back!!!!!!!!!!!!. Sara Kendrick December 11, 2018 at 5:45 AM Patrick, Thanks for the visit to my page. Yes, time slips away. We all have 24 hours in a day to spend but we all spend it differently. When we get old( if we are allowed to live that long), will we live with regret or will be happy of the way we spent our time? Sara

Jack Horne November 29, 2018 at 8:51 AM yes, very well observed indeed Sara Kendrick December 31, 2018 at 11:20 AM Jack, Thanks for dropping by so many times. Sara

Gary Bateman November 27, 2018 at 5:19 PM Hello Sara, Thanks for your recent comment on one of my latest poems!! I've written several poems on Time and other related concepts to it. Your concept of it as you reveal it here in your poem is most excellent!! Superb Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary Sara Kendrick December 31, 2018 at 11:20 AM Thanks for dropping by. Your comments are uplifting. I appreciate your presence here. Time does march on. Sara

Sherry Asbury November 25, 2018 at 11:47 PM Love this...I often sit and think about time and how most of my friends and classmates have probably left this mortal coil...Just complained about the heat, seems like yesterday - and now Christmas looms. Sara Kendrick November 26, 2018 at 7:20 AM Sherry, Time does have a way of swiftly passing by but then again sometimes it moves very slowly. Your comment is encouraging. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Andrea Dietrich November 25, 2018 at 6:30 PM Sara, you chose a very easy way to do that shape poem. Wish I had thought of this. Very nicely done. Sara Kendrick November 26, 2018 at 3:29 PM Andrea, You was very eager to write one using a unique shape even though they are not so easy to do. I know yours is excellent. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Arturo Michael November 25, 2018 at 1:48 PM You achieved the hourglass effect...Well written...All the best Sara Sara Kendrick November 25, 2018 at 1:59 PM Arturo, Your presence at my work is encouraging. Thanks for dropping by. Good it worked out to look like an hour glass. Sara

Lemayian Leksat November 25, 2018 at 10:42 AM Wow! Well put Sara, thank you. Sara Kendrick November 25, 2018 at 12:18 PM Lemayian, Thanks for stopping by with an uplifting comment. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Heidi Sands November 25, 2018 at 9:38 AM Very nicely written Sara :) Sara Kendrick November 25, 2018 at 10:19 AM Heidi, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara