Time Flows Through the Hour Glass

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Time keeps marching on second by second flows Minute by minute the sand just goes Daytime, lunch, peace, or wartime Springtime, sublime time Time trickles Time Like nickles Slips through overtime Soon it reaches wintertime Where the time went only God now knows Time keeps marching on second by second flows nickel, American coin worth 5 cents

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Patrick Nigros

Date: 12/11/2018 5:40:00 AM

Ha-Ha-Ha. Beautiful Piece. Thanks for your visit. Reading the through this piece, I though of the day i posted my First poem on this soup. i remember it like it was yesterday it was Five years Back!!!!!!!!!!!!.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/11/2018 5:45:00 AM

Patrick, Thanks for the visit to my page. Yes, time slips away. We all have 24 hours in a day to spend but we all spend it differently. When we get old( if we are allowed to live that long), will we live with regret or will be happy of the way we spent our time? Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 11/29/2018 8:51:00 AM

yes, very well observed indeed

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/31/2018 11:20:00 AM

Jack, Thanks for dropping by so many times. Sara

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/27/2018 5:19:00 PM

Hello Sara, Thanks for your recent comment on one of my latest poems!! I've written several poems on Time and other related concepts to it. Your concept of it as you reveal it here in your poem is most excellent!! Superb Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/31/2018 11:20:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by. Your comments are uplifting. I appreciate your presence here. Time does march on. Sara

Sherry Asbury

Date: 11/25/2018 11:47:00 PM

Love this...I often sit and think about time and how most of my friends and classmates have probably left this mortal coil...Just complained about the heat, seems like yesterday - and now Christmas looms.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/26/2018 7:20:00 AM

Sherry, Time does have a way of swiftly passing by but then again sometimes it moves very slowly. Your comment is encouraging. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2018 6:30:00 PM

Sara, you chose a very easy way to do that shape poem. Wish I had thought of this. Very nicely done.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/26/2018 3:29:00 PM

Andrea, You was very eager to write one using a unique shape even though they are not so easy to do. I know yours is excellent. Thanks for dropping by. Sara