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wasting away weary and doubt riddled eroded memories

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Daver Austin

Date: 10/16/2015 11:09:00 AM

Yes! At 85 those memories are too often used. Congrat, daver

Paul Callus
Date: 10/16/2015 1:01:00 PM

Thank you Daver. It must be somewhat hard for young ones to fully comprehend the full meaning of this senryu! ~ All the best. // paul

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/18/2015 12:58:00 AM

Very smart senryu!! Really got my mind going. :) Always, Laura

Paul Callus
Date: 8/18/2015 5:10:00 AM

Thank you, Laura! Both lovely visit and comments are much appreciated:) All the best. ~ paul

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/15/2015 1:17:00 PM

A very beautiful write, it is lovely and excellence..........A.M.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/15/2015 3:24:00 PM

Pleased that you like it Afolabi. Thank you for reading and commenting. // paul

Joseph May

Date: 8/13/2015 12:29:00 PM

Very interesting analogy Paul....Nicely penned...

Paul Callus
Date: 8/13/2015 1:08:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. A pleasure to have you stopping by. // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/12/2015 10:54:00 AM

the brittle tone of this senryu is beautiful...very finely done, paul!.. huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 8/12/2015 11:33:00 AM

Thank you, Nette. Your visit and comments are appreciated:) hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2015 1:04:00 AM

very nice one. I am seeing a bunch of these kinds of poems tonight. Gosh, am I missing a new contest on haiku???

Paul Callus
Date: 8/12/2015 11:08:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. ~ As far as I know there isn't such a contest on offer; maybe many of us have been brooding over time's relentless speed! // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/11/2015 11:46:00 PM

a masterpiece this is Paul, a pleasure to have read P.D.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/12/2015 11:04:00 AM

Thank you for your generous comment, Linda:) So glad you found this to your liking. ~ hugs // paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/11/2015 3:24:00 PM

Sadly it happens over time... nicely said but depressing thoughts

Paul Callus
Date: 8/11/2015 4:45:00 PM

Hi Casarah! I'm no pessimist, but reality of life can't be discarded, thus we tend to get caught up in dark moments. Fortunately they never last long:) Hugs // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/11/2015 2:41:00 PM

An intriguing perspective you have taken on time consumed, my friend. It is one which is very much true, though. Good one! hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 8/11/2015 4:39:00 PM

Sometimes one can't help being caught up in one of these sad moods; best way out is to put it down in writing! Thank you, Kim, for popping in to brighten the atmosphere:) ~ Hugs // paul