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Time Considerations

When there is no plan B When all weighs heavily upon me When all friends seem lost When I have considered all the cost When bills pile high When all I want to do is cry Then I will challenge problems anew Then I will search for solutions through and through Then I will give thanks to my Creator Then I will silence my inner debater Then I will offer up a song of praise Then I will look for better days

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Benjamin Bartley

Date: 9/10/2024 9:47:00 AM

I really like the ending. Thanks for sharing. And the When/then and all the rhyming. Wow, nicely written.

Elizabeth Feeley
Date: 9/10/2024 11:23:00 AM

Thank you, Benjamin, I think I wrote this to remind myself that circumstances are only circumstances. They don’t define who we are, and we always have choices. We just need to search them out and then act on the good. Best regards, Elizabeth