Time Can'T Stop the Thrill

Time, 
Rushed,
Please stop,
Demanding,
The pleasure of fun
Seconds should be more than 60

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Hands,
up,
Hands down,
Let's get dance,
Thrilled on the dance floor
Melt on urge,  last on steps, show time!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 3, 2012 at 8:01 AM
I am not familiar with this style, but really enjoyed your poem. It brought me two very different emotions.
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