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Time, Bird, Shadow

let time wait instead us... and pass the birds ... follow their shadow on the ground .

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Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/3/2014 9:35:00 PM

Hi, Rene, I liked your Haiku. Since you wrote it first in French, I can understand the translation does not come out 5-7-5 as the common Haiku written here does. But I still think the meaning comes through nicely. Welcome to the soup page here. And I hope to read more of your poems. Blessings, Darlene

Rene Chabriere

Date: 11/3/2014 4:20:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Pandita.. I try... I'm not a specialist of haikus... this one was made as an answer to an other one... ( I like sometimes to introduce a dialogue, - like a suite between two creations....) good evening to you Ren

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/3/2014 3:40:00 PM

Beautiful, exquisite haiku, my friend! Well done! You are right that many times some meanings are lost in translation. But you did a great job! Bravo! Pandita

Rene Chabriere
Date: 11/3/2014 4:22:00 PM