Time, Bird, Shadow

let time wait instead us...
and pass the birds ...
follow their shadow on the ground  .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gifford Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 9:35 PM
Hi, Rene, I liked your Haiku. Since you wrote it first in French, I can understand the translation does not come out 5-7-5 as the common Haiku written here does. But I still think the meaning comes through nicely. Welcome to the soup page here. And I hope to read more of your poems. Blessings, Darlene
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November 3, 2014 at 4:20 PM
Thanks a lot, Pandita.. I try... I'm not a specialist of haikus... this one was made as an answer to an other one... ( I like sometimes to introduce a dialogue, - like a suite between two creations....) good evening to you Ren
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November 3, 2014 at 3:40 PM
Beautiful, exquisite haiku, my friend! Well done! You are right that many times some meanings are lost in translation. But you did a great job! Bravo! Pandita
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November 3, 2014 at 4:22 PM
Thanks a lot, Pandita.. I try... I'm not a specialist of haikus... this one was made as an answer to an other one... ( I like sometimes to introduce a dialogue, - like a suite between two creations....) good evening to you -------------Ren
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