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Time Between Us

I measure time with little smiles and warm tears Smiles make it pass soon by towards the day we meet Tears slow it down until time stops And you are further and further beyond my reach

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/16/2015 1:45:00 PM
Beautiful but the final couplet is so sad:-( Hugs Jan xxx
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Mona Karaki
Date: 2/16/2015 6:20:00 PM
Feel your hugs, thank you i think she's not sad she is just waiting.in the end time will pass by. Soon!
Date: 2/16/2015 10:28:00 AM
I like how u use smiles and tears to describe time. Well penned
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Mona Karaki
Date: 2/16/2015 10:39:00 AM
Thank you njery, time passes soon by when we are happy and when we are sad it stops. Emotions control not only us but also time

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