Time Between Us

I measure time with little smiles and warm tears

Smiles make it pass soon by towards the day we meet


Tears slow it down until time stops 
And you are further and further beyond my reach
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 1:45 PM
Beautiful but the final couplet is so sad:-( Hugs Jan xxx
Karaki Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 6:20 PM
Feel your hugs, thank you i think she's not sad she is just waiting.in the end time will pass by. Soon!
Hunjeri Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 10:28 AM
I like how u use smiles and tears to describe time. Well penned
Karaki Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Thank you njery, time passes soon by when we are happy and when we are sad it stops. Emotions control not only us but also time
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