Get Your Premium Membership

Time

The whirling fan stirs 
The soft warm air
And lulls to sleep 
The hazy mind

The clock in the corner 
Ticks on and on 
The heating vent sighs
Closing heavy lidded eyes
AS time slips away
And says good bye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/2/2018 1:38:00 PM
Hello Jim Joyce, you have described time passing very well. Have a nice day my friend.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/1/2015 11:00:00 AM
sweet little poem..:)
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry