Time

TIME passing so quickly the blue moon rises controlling every tide waves endlessly rolling by “live life to the full don’t waste it” Jan Allison 6th June 2014 Written for Create Your Pyramid Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud Theme: Hourglass

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Robert Nehls

Date: 7/10/2014 3:42:00 AM

Very well put, Jan, With each day comes another opportunity to be grateful and to live as if there will be no tomorrow. Short, but well crafted. Loved it my friend..... Robert.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2014 6:43:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Robert. Hugs Jan xxx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/16/2014 3:27:00 PM

the 2nd stanza nailed this piece, jan.. belated congrats on your fine win in my challenge.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2014 3:38:00 PM

Thanks Nette I am still learning here every day and I love the challenges you set and I try my best to get it right :-) hugs Jan xxxxx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/14/2014 8:07:00 AM

Great advice poetically expressed, congrats Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/14/2014 11:18:00 AM

Thanks Richard for your lovely comment. Hugs Jan xxxx

Len Gasun

Date: 6/13/2014 10:52:00 AM

This is also a brilliant write my dear friend Jan. My hearty congratulations on your win! Hugs and cheers! Thanks also for stopping by on mine. love lots and hugs, Leonora

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2014 11:06:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Leonora. Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/12/2014 8:30:00 PM

Grats on your poem :) It was very cool. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2014 1:37:00 AM

Thanks Casarah its very poignant at the moment. Hugs Jan xxxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2014 12:08:00 AM

Your thinking was similar to mine, Jan. I really like your winning poem. Congratulations.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2014 5:47:00 AM

Thanks Andrea having read the winning entries i think many of us had the same thoughts. Hugs jan xxx

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2014 11:17:00 PM

Jan, :) CONGRATS in Nette's CREATE YOUR PYRAMID contest! Luv ~SKAT~

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2014 5:46:00 AM

cheers SKAT. Hugs jan xxx

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/11/2014 3:27:00 PM

Supreme advice in your last line of wisdom. Congratulations, Jan !!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2014 3:29:00 PM

Thanks Carrie for the lovely comment. Hugs Jan xxx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/11/2014 3:19:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2014 3:29:00 PM

Thanks Debbie. Hugs jan xxx

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/11/2014 2:32:00 PM

Jan, beautiful write and win for the contest. Congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2014 2:33:00 PM

Thanks Faye Hugs Jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2014 10:38:00 AM

To Tell you the truth, I was not up for much souping until, I got Darrens, soup mail days ago. I was happy to read his part, then I realize I was missing out on a lot here.. Thank to both of you, and a few others.. Love Linda

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2014 2:33:00 PM

:-) Jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2014 10:28:00 AM

Thank you Jan, for the reply... By The Way, I Love how you and Darren, pulled off the 3-way collaboration. I will work on my half tonight... HUGS... Linda

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2014 10:32:00 AM

Oh thanks Linda I wasn't sure I was up to it at the moment BUT Darren inspires me, encourages me and is keeping me focused which is what I need at the moment. Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2014 9:47:00 AM

Jan, love the message here. Congratulations, with your sweet PYRAMID win.... Hugs ~LINDA~

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2014 10:20:00 AM

Thanks Linda at the moment the poem is very prophetic! Hugs Jan xxxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/11/2014 6:35:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win, creating a lovely Pyramid, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2014 6:36:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Dr Mehta. Hugs Jan xxx

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/11/2014 3:46:00 AM

Jan, a lovely time pyramid and congratulations on fine win. Mohan

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2014 6:36:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Mohan. hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/11/2014 3:06:00 AM

Congratulations Jan! I fell in love with your second batch of lines the first time I read this poem! cu // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2014 3:11:00 AM

Thanks Paul this poem is very poignant in my life at the moment so the win truly does mean the world to me. Hugs Jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/11/2014 2:44:00 AM

Jan sweet sweet strong Jan..:) I m happy to read two sets of comments you passed that you are becoming better and better...:) I'm glad!!! And this pyramid how love is the image of the blue moon rising as the waves continue to roll by and I see you as this one..:) conqueror of every trial that's laid on you..:) hugs hugs and big CONGRATULATIONS!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2014 2:49:00 AM

Olive thank you so much for your kind words and more importantly, you understand how much the words of this poem mean to me . Hugs as ever Jan xxxx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/10/2014 11:24:00 PM

Stopping back with congrats... Hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2014 12:32:00 AM

Ooh has the contest been judged i didn't know - thanks for your support as ever Tim - hugs Jan xxxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 6/9/2014 5:40:00 PM

A lot said... and said well... Loved this one! It is great!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2014 5:59:00 PM

Thanks Carol. Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2014 1:39:00 PM

- A great poem, Jan - Good luck in the contest! - Thank you for your faithful reader of my poems - (I have not had time to "soup" this past week. - Have a nice Sunday :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2014 1:45:00 AM

Nor me Anne Lise I took the weekend off, Hugs as ever Jan xxxx

Darren Watson

Date: 6/8/2014 8:50:00 AM

A thoroughly enjoyable read , Be sure to save a little of that time for yourself Jan ,

Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2014 1:45:00 AM

Darren I promise as soon as i can I will xxxxxx Hugs Jan xxx

Jack Horne

Date: 6/7/2014 5:25:00 PM

a sure winner here, my friend

Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2014 1:44:00 AM

Oh jack that is so kind thank you. Hugs jan xxx

Deborah Shiells

Date: 6/7/2014 6:19:00 AM

Best to you in the contest as well~ Jan :~)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2014 1:44:00 AM

Thanks Deborah . I write and hope for the best a win is wonderful but just stretching myself to learn new forms is superb too. Hugs janx xxx

Deborah Shiells

Date: 6/7/2014 6:17:00 AM

Hi Jan, Outstanding write my friend. Words said with vision as always:~) This write says so much in such few words~ Thank you as always for sharing this write with us. Love and Peace, Deborah

Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2014 1:42:00 AM

Thanks as ever Deborah. hugs Jan xxxx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/6/2014 11:01:00 PM

A beautiful poem, with wise words, if only we all thought this way!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2014 1:41:00 AM

Thanks as ever for dropping by Arthur. hugs jan xxx