Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Poet Couplet

Time

Time is yesterdays tomorrow, tomorrows yesterday, grasped for and then lost
We fight for it and attain it, then waste it, only then to find out what it really cost.

Entry for Contest sponsored By: Black Eyed Susan

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Nick Bagnall September 18, 2012 at 5:55 AM All I can say is that the moment you wrote this was not wasted, really very good.

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2012 at 3:12 PM DEEP!!! I see why she chose it in a top win!! Congrast, mandy.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders September 6, 2012 at 2:47 PM Excellent couplet, Mandy! Belated congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda

Debra Falgout September 5, 2012 at 8:09 PM I really enjoyed your poem, congrats on your win, love debra

Poet Destroyer A September 5, 2012 at 7:23 PM Mandy, congratulations, with your awesome couplets in Susan's "Time - single rhyming couplet contest " I really am enjoying many of her winners... good night~PD

Kim Merryman September 5, 2012 at 5:24 PM Very perceptive, Mandy! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Love, Kim

Cynthia Alvez September 5, 2012 at 4:17 PM Congratulations! Fabulous entry on time. Cynthia

Carol Sunshine Brown September 5, 2012 at 6:55 AM Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Time" contest GG. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud September 4, 2012 at 10:20 PM beautiful words of wisdom, mandy.. congrats in your super win!..:) huggs!

Olusegun Arowolo September 4, 2012 at 4:56 PM Excellent and wonderful write,Mandy.Nice couplet.Congratulations on your win..

Vicky Tsiluma September 4, 2012 at 11:26 AM Congrats Mandy! A true gem!

Apoorva Patrikar September 4, 2012 at 10:33 AM a well deserved win. ..

Harry Horsman September 4, 2012 at 8:08 AM congrats this is a beauty. Harry Horsman September 4, 2012 at 8:09 AM soup mail,

Joseph May September 4, 2012 at 8:02 AM congrats on your win Mandy... nicely written

Don Johnson August 27, 2012 at 10:55 PM so what we never did today, will never be but thats ok, perhaps to do tomorrow, hey...

Erich Goller August 27, 2012 at 7:56 AM Time is precious. a very wise expressed poem, Thanks for sharing it, God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Harry Horsman August 27, 2012 at 6:48 AM love the philosophy Mandy and the sentiment. soup mail

Debbie Guzzi August 26, 2012 at 5:35 PM So true we are of a mind! Light & Love

Ilene Bauer August 26, 2012 at 5:07 PM very perceptive! i like it!

Jack Horne August 26, 2012 at 12:11 PM wow, I just love this one, Mandy. Many congrats on your wins : )

Joann Grisetti August 26, 2012 at 12:09 PM Time does cost us, sometimes more than we may be willing to pay. Best of luck in the contest.