Time

Time is short in our organic eyes Time moves only forward so It Can not help but pass us by Its all the reason we can't Always do things we Wish to attempt Its What the Judgements Steal for Crimes Of survival That powerful Men, pride, and Media trend made Unavoidable by creative Systems to misinform are Youth and enslave the minds That could truly free us on time.

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Skat A

Date: 6/9/2016 10:58:00 PM

Shawn, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT

Shawn Gorsick
Date: 7/9/2022 5:42:00 AM

Thanks a bunch

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/5/2011 8:32:00 AM

What a way to start my week, reading the words that are flowing from your soul. May you find the inspiration each day to continue writing and sharing your wonderful poetry with us Shawn. Love, Carol

Shawn Gorsick
Date: 7/9/2022 5:43:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed

Ingibo Benson

Date: 7/4/2011 5:54:00 PM

Hi, Shawn, a fine piece of poetry, you've here. I love your show of creativity.

Shawn Gorsick
Date: 7/9/2022 5:44:00 AM

Its the little touches and sparks of creativity that make life beautiful