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Thought provoking Senryu, Farah. Enjoyed it. Spoken like a true poet. Of course,how else? Robert

Yes, Farah, Moments...memories... a running time.... Sometimes it would be good to just hold the time and stop fit for moments. Very nice Senryu and thank you for your friendly comment....Gert

Poised and beautiful senryu. Thx for your comment. All the best.

love it when a poet with your talent allows the reader to imagine! jimbo

Nice play on words and ideas. Keep writing. Sara

You can't outrace the clock hands - but nice poems make the attempt more enjoyable. Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish

Nice to read this one again--simply stated but has a lot of meaning. Hope things are going well for you. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

I enjoyed reading this poem.

There is so much to think about in just three lines. Nice one! I also wanted to stop by and thank you for contributing to On Butterfly Wings. It is talented people like you that made the book possible. I hope you are enjoying it as much as I am. Blessings to you. Karen

Hello Farah, TY for your warm comment on my The Pride of Parents. Keep on sharing. Ernilando

Lovely poetry Farah like the enigma.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian

Maybe if you descend from up high, you could learn how to walk, not run my friend. Great job…Remember to keep your spirits high but self on ground dear one. Take care.

Interesting perspective here. I like the opening line and your use of alliteration. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Karen

listen to your chest. jhl

Ooh, good question Farah. It seems the more I try to learn about this subject, the less I know. Thought provoking and excellent (of course). Love, Shar