Time

Time marks the beginning, Time marks the end It is often my enemy and sometimes my friend There is a star I look for most every night And dream of love with all my might To cry in my sleep may mean I am weak But it is empty inside and it is love I seek Give me your joys as well as your sorrow I will give you my life and all of my tomorrow

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Tom Pen

Date: 1/14/2020 8:21:00 AM

Time can be a great friend, some time feels like a killer. I wonder what time this is, buddy do you have the time?

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 6/21/2019 11:39:00 AM

crying is good, means you're human, you 'feel'....to cry does not mean you are weak.

Aqua Marine

Date: 5/1/2019 5:52:00 PM

Deep emotions expressed in a well structured poem, Cat Daddy- welcome to poetry soup, and Carry on Writing!

Tom Pen

Date: 3/29/2019 1:56:00 PM

So very thoughtful and tender. Magic sweet inspiration. Please don’t stop, what you do is beautiful!

John Conde

Date: 2/23/2019 6:51:00 AM

Ito my favs. This is simple but deep well donr Cat

Mark Weismantel

Date: 2/21/2019 8:41:00 PM

i like this poem and think those words are probably true for many people. great job! btw, the format is couplet in case you write any in the future and i hope you do.

Innocent Thabiso

Date: 2/19/2019 9:06:00 AM

what a fine peace and enjoyable to read like timelessly

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/18/2019 9:53:00 AM

Love this poem..and well done Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/10/2019 9:06:00 PM

Cat Daddy, I would have probably typed this poem as "rhyme" because you did such a great job rhyming it. "It is often my enemy and sometimes my friend". A lovely poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Cat Daddy.