Tim Mcgraw

Here lies the body shot to hell
Of the gunslinger Tim McGraw
Quick on the trigger, all can tell
He was awful slow on the draw


11-16-20
Contest: Quat-Ro your Four Line
Sponsor: Brian Strand
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Ashley Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 6:59 PM
Lol! Your witty pen is sharp, Larry. Fantastic! Love that last line. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan
Bradfield Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 7:07 PM
Thank you, Susan!!!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 4:51 PM
Quick on the trigger, slow on the draw...lol
Bradfield Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 5:06 PM
Thanks, Kim. Glad it made you smile!
Dietrich Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 4:39 PM
I really like this. Way to go with your win.
Bradfield Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 4:57 PM
Thank you, Andre!!
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