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Drifting vacant skies, forever on wings, Is little blackbird, whose heart ever sings! Soaring in mellow sunshine, nowhere a care, Like a Parkside picnic in the sunny glare! Darling of the blue, and marshmallow clouds, At times seen alone, oftentimes in crowds! Pretty blackbird, which place is your home? And whatever wanderlust causes you to roam? Gracefully you fly on gold skies of late July, As the last moments of one summer day tick by; But, too soon the whole world loses its light, And you vanish into the ebony, kindred night!

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Date: 1/28/2020 10:00:00 AM
Simply and poignantly beautiful! Lonna
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/28/2020 11:47:00 AM
My deepest thanks, Lonna.
Date: 1/26/2020 6:40:00 AM
such vivid imagery painting a wonderful scene Evelyn...that opening "drifting vacant skies forever on wings" sets the tone perfectly... enjoyed this one :)
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Date: 1/26/2020 12:49:00 PM
My deepest thanks, Sandra. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 1/25/2020 10:31:00 PM
Gorgeously imaged; vibrant colors which work so well with the little blackbird. Sweetly penned, Evelyn! :) Gershon
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Date: 1/25/2020 11:09:00 PM
So delighted that you found the imagery colorful and pleasing, Gershon! Thank you for a most cheering comment. :=)

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