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Till the End

“We’ll make it till the end,” I say And when the end comes We'll both know that it's over now And when it’s over Only God will know what we’re fighting for And what we’re fighting for Is what no one else will understand And what no one else understands Will carry us all the way “What is ‘the end’?” you ask “The end” is where one of us is lying in that bed We’re barely breathing The other is right beside us Praying to God that he doesn’t take you And when he does That’s the end…. “We’ll make it till the end,” I say And when the end comes We won’t be afraid And without that fear of losing one another We’ll know what we’re fighting for And what we’re fighting for Is what only we’ll begin to understand And what we understand Will always be expressed by a simple four letter word Love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/2/2016 9:37:00 PM
You've definitely got your feelings in line. No question there. Good job. Keep up the good work.
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Tatianna Leachet
Date: 11/2/2016 10:14:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 11/1/2016 12:28:00 PM
I love the feeling of this and the message that it expresses. I especially enjoyed, what were fighting for is something no one else understands and that will carry us through. Absolutely beautiful poetry
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Tatianna Leachet
Date: 11/1/2016 5:24:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 10/31/2016 5:52:00 AM
Very emotional write , like the way you have structured the poem stephen
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Tatianna Leachet
Date: 10/31/2016 6:32:00 AM
Thank you :)

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