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I watch the splendor of a shooting star and breathe the beauty of a hum-guitar Her light in flight is like a million lanterns on a cooling night I dream awhile beneath the tarp of heaven then close my eyes & slowly count to seven I wish in true for souls renew and soon I’m covered in night’s dew I lose the mind and pry his realm it`s an expedience of God’s mystic dream When free I see the beauty of his creation for all eternity I watch the splendor of a bird in flight and breathe the beauty of a blessed night His wings they sing to me of freedom, and all a night can bring; If only we can learn to sing Like a Cardinal on a string! ......................... 4/20/2016 Contest of Mystic Rose

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:46:00 AM
Nette, Congrats on your win in Mystic's contest. *LINDA*
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Date: 4/22/2016 9:14:00 AM
Very well done Nette. Nice response in content and form.
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Date: 4/22/2016 4:59:00 AM
Wonderful poetry n win nette.. big congrats
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Date: 4/21/2016 9:59:00 AM
Congratulation my lovely friend on your beautiful win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/21/2016 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations Nette, great work and win...
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Date: 4/20/2016 7:49:00 AM
Those we love and now gone are stars watching us. Heartwarming poem that touches me---excellent!
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Date: 4/20/2016 4:21:00 AM
Excellent. Very heartfelt write. All the best for the contest. Thanks for ahring it.
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Date: 4/19/2016 3:57:00 PM
Nette, Nette, what can I say. Every time I read one of your poems I am left with much admiration. You inspire me to endeavor forever to achieve such beauty and grace with words. Peace and many blessings to you.
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