Till My Ticker Expires

Work seven till five		
To stay off the street.
When I do overtime		
Come home dead on my feet.
Seems month after month	
Can afford less to eat.
When they raise my rent--	
Could be out on the street.

My car’s fairly new;		
Got a decent TV.
My home has a view.		
The bank owns them, not me.
I went back to school,		
Got another degree.
Still work like a fool		
'cause of the ‘conomy.

Ain’t yet had a raise		
Since the day I was hired.
Each check buys me less.	
Cost-of-living gets higher.
My one biggest fear’s		
That I’ll never retire.
I’ll be working somewhere	
‘til my ticker expires.

Ain’t yet had a raise.		
Come home dead on my feet.
Each check buys me less-- 	
Can afford less to eat.
My one biggest fear,		
Since the day I was hired:
I’ll be doin’ overtime		
Until my ticker expires.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nehls Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 3:08 AM
Hi, Mark. saw you are online and thought I'd read something of yours. I like this one a lot, can certainly relate and I'm sure many others can. I like the rhymes and the way it flows. Well done.... Robert.
Halliday Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 3:50 PM
This was one of my bluesy songs. Thanks for commenting. My other better songs are Sitting On A Cloud, and Lady Luck Stomped Out. I'm probably goingto add verses to Egyptian Dancer too, but it is tricky as the rhythm is in 9/8.
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