Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Till Moment

when... were not
                                        God is there to judge
                                            was were past(-)

                                               now dealing
                                            in present with all
                                               gone before(+)

                                                deduct null
                                           with was were total
                                               equals to(=)

                                               where's neutral
                                          God was and were with 
                                                  till moment

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Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2015 at 8:09 PM and with no beginning and no end. It's hard to fathom!! Bl Devnath January 16, 2015 at 11:20 PM Thanks my lovely friend for you comment. Loved always,bl

Nette Onclaud January 16, 2015 at 9:31 AM this is a deep, different way of conveying spirituality.. lovely!.. huggs Bl Devnath January 16, 2015 at 9:44 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. I just try to feel simply. Loved always,bl