Tiger In My Tank

Jumping in head first.
Mighty tiger in my tank.
Eyes closed determined.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 6:24 PM
Excelente poema! Great imagery, JAM...much love, siempre, PB
Neshat Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 1:16 AM
That is a wonderful poem!
Brown Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 10:06 AM
Wishing you the best in Raul's Primal Instinct contest Jimmy. Love,Carol
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Way to think outside the box! HOpe you are dong well, Jimmy. LUv, Andrea
Murphy Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 8:51 AM
very nice and good luck in the contest thanks for your comments I tried so hard and finally won a haiku contest i'm so proud have a great day faleshia
Devonshire Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 11:05 PM
Excellent haiku, Jimmy. Sometimes when we jump in "head first with our "eyes closed," danger awaits. Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Chachere Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 10:30 PM
does this have a certain meaning to it? .this sounds a little different you know, i got a different image.ha. awesome good luck -Always&Forever Lynette
Scripca Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 10:29 PM
Good luck in the contest but I thought "cats" ain't like water or swimming :) Soup mail
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