Tiering Depression

Sinking
Slowly Falling
Someone Found Out

Dying
Deep Trouble
Doing Things Evil

Loser
Life Over
Lying Of Myself

Writing
Wanting Life
Wishing Love Began

Sleeping
Sinful Living
So Little Time

Decaying
Destroying Me
Deserving My Pain

Looking
Losing Vision
Lacking Very Lifeforce

Wanting
Worrying Much
Wiping Many Tears

Faking
Feeling Lonesome
Freeing Lucifer Satan

Typing
Tearing Apart
Taking Apples Creedily

Ornating
Overly Stimulated
Opening Sorrowful Heart

Bilging
Begetting Loneliness
Being Lost Inside

Forgotten
Flailed Upon
Fumbling Under Pressure
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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July 26, 2008 at 6:44 PM
I thought for a second that you might have an anagram going here and looked desperately for some kind of rhythm. By doing that I lost the emotion. I'll be praying for you.
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July 24, 2008 at 4:31 PM
This poem captured my attention. Reading it, it sounds so desperate. Almost like you can't catch your breath! Such emotion isn't easy to live, or easy to write. Good job. I hope your world has more peace, than that lost place described in this poem. Blessings...Carrie
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