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Tien the Form

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TIEN is a one line poem of ten words of one syllable (no title) full of pathos

note derived from Tichborne's 'Prime of Youth'

The past,my now,with me each day will stay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Peter Rees
Date: 1/16/2023 7:15:00 AM
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I used to think “Never look Back” was a good lifetime slogan. Now I realise it was impossible to abide by. We’re always looking back, on good and bad, mistakes and successes, opportunities missed - it’s life and we’re carried forward on its tide. Your well-worded single line sums it up. Thank you.
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