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Tied With a String

If I could I would reach up and give you the moon Tied with a string like a yellow balloon So when you slept beneath it's golden beams You'd see the light of my love in your dreams

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Becca Teagan

Date: 12/1/2016 9:05:00 PM

This is so sweet Chris. I think any girl would melt to hear this, from your pen.

Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 8:34:00 AM

Thank you so very much Rebecca. Just a little love poem for the night. I am glad you liked it.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/28/2016 9:34:00 PM

You have stolen the words from my heart! ( kidding) just to say amazing poem!

Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2016 8:47:00 AM

Thanks so very much Arthur, I always appreciate your visits to my poetry.

Christy Stover

Date: 11/28/2016 8:01:00 PM

Beautiful poem, speaks to the excitement and passion of young love.

Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2016 8:47:00 AM

Thank so very much Christy for you kind thoughts. I'm glad you liked this little poem.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/28/2016 6:08:00 PM

Gonna go check the moon..I might float up high if you did that strimg...Oh so wonderful to go up to those stars.. Imagine..to be hanging to the moon : )...Sweet indeed..You put a smile on my face now..So far the highest I travelled is on a plane and a helium balloon.: )..A fave.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/29/2016 2:02:00 PM

Shall We call you Frank? :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2016 8:46:00 AM

Thanks so very much my sweet friend. I know that song well, was just listening to it the other day. "Fly me to the moon and let me play among the stars. Let me see what spring is like on Jupiter and Mars. In other words, hold my hand. In other words, baby kiss me." Ok, that's all for now. Did I sound like Frank Sinatra? :)

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/28/2016 6:10:00 PM

There is an oldie song calledn'Fly me to the moon'...Just thought of it...: )

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/28/2016 5:46:00 PM

This is a cute one - so sweet , Chris. A Favorite. :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2016 8:44:00 AM

Thank you Heidi for always being so kind to me. I appreciate you so much my friend.